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Revealed: car industry was warned keyless vehicles vulnerable to theft a decade ago
(www.theguardian.com)
This is a most excellent place for technology news and articles.
Just a writing tip: separate your points into distinct sections.
Your point makes sense, but reads better when broken up into distinct paragraphs or thoughts.
It's already separated into two paragraphs, separating both points I'm making.
Certainly is after your edits. Thanks.
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I didn't split it in two as an edit, it was split from the get go...
Edit: I looked again and the only difference is that I added "proportionally"