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Worldbuilding

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This is a Claravian* womb ship, so called because it contains amnions, which are metabolic suspension capsules that allow missionaries to survive STL interstellar travel.

This is a port-side view of the craft. It's forward end is covered by a polymerite impact shield, with small multi-sensors dotted across it. A ring of four force projectors encircle the craft providing forward motion.

The pressure vessel (the orange capsule-like structure covered by the impact shield) is roughly the size of a shipping container. A single airlock is located at the aft end of the ship.

Missionaries of the Bright Way use womb ships to carry out the Great Commandment, to find other sophonts dwelling among the stars.

Because yinrih are incapable of fully losing consciousness without dying, they cannot sleep away the journey. Instead, amnions work by speeding up the missionary's time perception while presenting a simulacrum to their nervous system while suspending their other metabolic processes. Missionaries in metabolic suspension are still aware and able to interact with the ship's systems through a Matrix-like interface.

The handles along the sides of the craft asist in maintenance EVAs performed by one of the suspended missionaries using a remotely piloted micro mech.

This particular womb ship is named the Dewfall. It has the distinction of being the first and only womb ship to actually encounter sapient life after dozens of millennia of fruitless searching.


*A human coinage meaning Of or relating to the Bright Way. From Latin Clara Via

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[–] [email protected] 1 points 2 weeks ago (1 children)

I love it. I'm also the sort to do world building as a daydreaming thing, but I've fallen off it in the last year or so. Trying to spend less time on distractions so that the creativity has more room. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed reading House of Friendship!

[–] [email protected] 2 points 2 weeks ago (1 children)

Much appreciated! Been thinking of looking for a writing community to have my work critiqued. I know I said on the Neocities page I'm not an aspiring author, but it would be nice knowing whether and how much I've improved over time.

[–] [email protected] 1 points 2 weeks ago

It can be so hard to find people who will read world building stuff and give worthwhile feedback, but so rewarding - hence the community. I hope you'll post more of your work, and don't be bashful about @ing or DMing me for feedback. I tend to cruise All so I don't always see things posted here unless I go looking.